ermagosh. This is really cool.
I find the shadowing for this really good (as I could never draw this well xD). This is actually how I want the manga to end.
Ok, now for the real critique.
Vision: Ah! I really like your style, the semi-realistic view of Naruto and Sasuke. I love how it looks like you painted an actual scene from the manga. I have some problems with the cloak floating though. It's very possible that it's made of waterproof material, but I'm quite against that idea. Also, Naru's clothes have quite an amount of blood on them, though he didn't suffer as serious an injury as Sasu. 4 and a half stars!
Originality: I can't say that I haven't seen/read about similar scenes before, so I'm sorry I can't give you a 5 here. 4 and a half!
Technique: Like I said in Vision, I really, really love your semi-realistic style. You've gained an instant watch from me! 5!
Impact: AHHHHHH...... I felt my eyes tear. ;-; 5!
Aww thank you so much! I really wish it'll end this way too
Idrew this quite some time ago